TED - Are athletes really getting faster, better, stronger?

영어학원에서 스피치로 진행했습니다. 주제는 TED - Are athletes really getting faster, better, stronger?

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Examples of Sport-technology adaptation

 Have you ever fallen in love with sports? Well, I have a crush on volleyball recently, in my case. Even if you've never been love with sports, you might play sports before. You can easily see articles that some athletes make new world record during web-surfing. But do you really think that world record is come from that athlete's pure effort? It's not, actually. Especially technology helped a lot. It makes athletes more powerful, and it helps them to make new world record. 

 Hawk-Eye is very famous for marvel hero character, however, Hawk-Eye system is well known for sports technology. This technology is used a lot in cricket, tennis, and volleyball. As same as it's name, this technology needs many eyes. Cameras. It makes 3D motion of the ball with those high quality cameras. For instance, tennis has 10 cameras in the court. It has reduced the criticism of the players, and helps to take an error-free decision. But Hawk-eye Systems engineer said that it's not always accurate. It's very big problem but it's still more accurate then human's eyes. According to Fares Saudi, Hawk-Eye senior systems engineer, it has improved its' accuracy further with every passing year.

  As you guys know, sports is really common thing in nowadays. And video technology affected to this phenomenon a lot. According to this statistics, sports market's growth increased every four year. According to 'this' statistics, the growth of the streaming video industry increased. Increasing of streaming video industry means that there is more chance to experience sports, and it also makes e-sports industry much larger, too. Video technology has increased both sports and e-sports industry pretty well.

 Sports has developed a lot during the decades, and there is technology behind that development. For instance, there are Hawk-Eye systems, which makes judge's judgement more accurate, and video technology, which has been making sports industry larger. This kind of technology will develop every seconds, and I believe that world record will change soon with the technology development, affected by these sports industry. 

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서론  (가장 빈약→다음 스피치 때에는 조금 더 강화해볼 것.)

화자의 개인적인 예시를 들어 설명을 보충함. 하지만 본문(body)과 관련 없는 volleyball에 대한 이유로 오히려 마이너스였음. 본문의 예시를 volleyball로 바꾸던가, 자신의 예시를 tennis로 바꿔야함. 본문1(hawkeye)와 연결되는 부분이 약하기 때문에 이 부분을 새로 바꿔주어야함. 중간에 문법이 맞지 않는 문장이 있었음. 

본론 

1. Hawk-Eye 시스템에 대해 약한 조크를 함으로써 분위기를 가볍게 환기시킴 

2. Hawk-Eye 시스템을 보다 이해하기 쉽도록 유튜브에서 Hawk-Eye 시스템을 만든 회사에서 배포한 Inside of Hawk-Eye 영상을 틀어줌. 플러스 포인트였다.

3.  TED에서는 순전히 athletes가 더 좋은 결과를 낼 수 있도록 equipment들이 발전되었다는 예시를 들었지만 화자는 경기 규칙과 '스포츠 산업'을 조금 더 발전시킨다는 것에 초점을 두어 TED를 서포트해주는 듯한 스피치를 만들었음. 그 중 하나가 바로 Video technology.

4. 비디오 산업과 E 스포츠 산업, 스포츠 산업의 성장그래프를 비교해봄으로써 유효한 근거로 만들었음. 다만 시간대가 맞지 않았고, PPT 상에서의 그래프가 작아 멀리서는 분간이 안된다는 것이 흠임.

결론

본론을 되짚어 보면서 간단하게 정리했음. 실제 PPT에서는 처음 시작 때 조금 더듬어 마이너스 요인이 되었을 것이라 생각됨. 암기를 조금 더 잘해볼 것.

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